Thursday, 19 February 2009

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Hey guys! I have a story and I will tell it to you! I was in school with Bruna, the girl who sits next to me. I wasn't wearing the uniform, I had jeans and a shirt on. When we were in Maths class, Bruna couldn't stop looking at my jeans and I asked "why are you looking at my jeans?" She said nothing. 20 minutes later she hadn't stopped looking at my jeans and I asked " Have my jeans got a problem?" she said "yes, you haven't fastened your zipper!" My God, that was horrible! But it was funny bye
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  1. Dani2/20/2009 10:24:00 pm

    That must have been really embarrassing... I hope you had some nice underwear on ;-)

    Now compare the improved version of your post with the one you wrote. Can you see what has been changed to improve your text?

    Hey guys!

    I have a history and i will say it four you!
    I was in school when Bruna, the girl whos sit with me.
    I wasn't using the unniforme I was with a
    jeans and a skirt.
    When we was in maths classroon Bruna couldn't stop to look my jeans
    in 20 she didn't stop and i asked "why are you looking my jeans?" She says nothen.
    20 minutes later she didn't stop to look my jeans and I asked " Have my jeans a problem?" she says "yes, you didn't close your zipper!"
    My good, that was horrible!
    But it was funny
    bye

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